by Krissey Jun 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Her trembling hands picked up the phone, |
I like the poem, but I do have one problem with it. In parts of the poem, you refer to the little girl as the narrator, as in "my mother died that night" or whatever it was. Then, in the next stanza it's someone else talking "Daddy had hit them both that night, |
by Laura
This is very touching..you have madd talent |
Hey , this is such a sad poem! |
Wow... I am speachless.. this is just... I do not own words to describe... I bow down for you.. |
by IfIhide11
I loved this poem. You did a wonderful job. I was very sad and thats what poetry is about. Keep up the good work. |