Very good ur a very good writer ur so deep and everything i loved it 5/5 keep up ur work ur very good

This is a great poem.i wont pity you cuz i hate for people to pity me.I will also take the blade away from you and we can become friends so i leave you my email address not filled with a bit of pity bgs7luv@yahoo.com.This is a wonderful poem!5/5

Willow, I know your hurting, I know you crying, and you know I'm going to be there in so many days! I'm taking that blade from you, and taking it homw with me so you can NEVER see it again! I dont want you to hurt anymore lilo. It hurts reading this poem and knowing that you are hurting for real. Please try and thing.

Luv Niquee
XOXOXOXO

Trust me when i say i dont pity you. it may feel that everyone who doesnt understand full pitys u but it isnt always so sometimes there are people who want to help but dont know how so that act the way they think best. ur poems are all beautiful and full of emotion. i dont cut but the impulse to do so gets stronger everyday. so all i can say is be strong and u r welcome to talk to me if u want to

I dont pity you.. i dont know you.. yet i feel the need to help you in anyway that i can. i know how it is.. i mean im trying to stop the cutting.. its harder then people might think. but either way.. i hope you snap out of this soon and realize hurting urself wont solve anything. amazing poems by the way.. all of them were great. full of emoiton.. your choice of words were perfect..
dee

"The blade is constantly allowing blood to fall.
Releasing my anger like rain in a storm." This is an amazing metaphor! It took awhile for my son to try to describe to me what it made him feel like when he cut, and why he cut. For a long time I could only understand it as the pain it caused, ...but I finally understood it is about the emotional pain, anger and strife it releases. Just so you know, he was diagnosed with Severe Depression and low self esteem. that was 18 mnths ago. He's been taking meds. and did therapy and is now FINALLY, the young man he wants to be. happy, without faking it, able to feel all kinds of emotions, not just sad. It's pretty amazing and wonderful! Please hang in there, get the help you need..it is so worth it...AND,,you have GREAT things to accomplish in your life...start now!! :)