Its hard to make a comment on a poem when its as amazing as this one.. it was more than a poem almost like a mini- story, wish I could give you more than a five:)

Very Excellent Poem...Keep It Up

Wow, this poem was amazing. its got wonderful flow and great emotions. it seems to go from sad to happy back to sad within seconds. 5/5

Wow!! I loved this.. I especially loved the twist at the end, with her old love coming back. Amazing! It must have been very well thought out, great job on this! 5/5**

Wow! You guys collab great! Good job! Charisma*