Your poem just makes me more determined to make a difference in the world because this is true, it happens all the time and people have no reason to kill another..most the victims are innocent..I love how when your bored or watch something you just get inspired and come out with something like this! I love your poems your such a talented woman!
Chels

Well for something how you usually dont write. Its great. The only part I didnt like was when you use the word "Kilt" cause I dont think you were talking about a scottish skirt.... But I understand what you meant so it didnt bother me that much at all.

I Carry On The Burden
Of a Life That He Turned Blue
Now My Family's Dead Inside
I Wish He'd Kill Me Too

I thought that was a great way to end it. Very powerful.

5/5 Obviously
~*`Bryce Dressler`*~

Your poem was very depressing but your right about the murderers out there. I don't understand how someone can take a life without their's being endangered.
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

I loved it, 5/5

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was really harsh. really good to. add that it was dad twist the whole thing. the the emotions in the ending remined me a similar one. i love it

Wow this poem is really really good!! i love it and its really well written! gr8 work!

Man this is soo good. I'm glad u seen it on tha news n it didn't really happen to you
chay

Woah.. really amazing poem. You use words really well, describing everything and making it easier for me to imagine it happening. I love how in the end it was her dad who was the murderer. Really great poem. I will definately read more of yours. Keep up the great work.
Tammie

Usual or not...breath-taking all the same.

Nikki --
Again, another wonderful poem you`ve delivered to the site. =D May not be of positive manner, but thats just fine with me. Depressing poems add a more interesting twist and depth to writing. I think you should keep this up, and not mush in to most of society ;; teenage love poems. This is really your style of writing. You do know that, don`t you? =D
Great job, love. 5/5

Love much,
Sam