First of all, I love the title of your poem, it's just beautiful. I also like how it's written, it kept my attention and your message is clear. This was my favorite part, because I can relate to it: |
by Whisper
David I loved it!! It's like 10 at night and I'm all tired, and I still liked it. It was amazing. And the rhyming... I'm waiting for you to rhyme something with orange. I didn't know half those words existed... Shows how good a poet you are, and how bad a poet i am. Loved it. 5/5 cause its once again perfect |