by Jessica Jun 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Laying peacefully in a bed of flowers |
Extraordinary work, bravo on such a superlative and simply fantastic write, incredibly well done, great job Jessy!!! |
by Polly
Great poem! I love the flow it has and the rhyming is perfect. You are a really great writer! 5/5 |
Aw, this is so cute and powerful.. And very different since it was written from a guys point of view. Very nice twist, and I loved the ending. Great job. |
by AnnMarie
This poem was awesome, it really was great! There is no critisism needed here! |
by Ike Dizzle
With someone that is younger than me, you write real good. 5/5 |