Awww! That was soo cute! =D I loved the last stanza so much! I think I know what contest you entered this in. Tehe =P

I didn't think there was anything wrong in this one, I thought it was written really well. It was so beautiful. I LOVE your love poems. Tehe. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

This was quite a pretty poem. I always get caught up in imagery and this time I couldn't get past those beautiful ruby lips, sea blue eyes and golden hair. And I kept remembering how it feels to be kissed by my girlfriend. A truly wonderful thing indeed. Good job.

Heh. This poem kind of made me want to fall in love again. I'm so jealous you got this title for the contest, but you deserve it. This poem is spectacular. Has a light feeling to it that lifts the reader (or at least, me) into a state of peace. You did a good job writing it from a guy's perspective.

Aken Sol

There were a few lines that were a bit too long to be incorporated into the rhythm, but the imagery and rhymes were fantanstic, and like I said, cinnamon kiss is just such a great phrase.... ah wow. I love that phrase.

Hat seemed really good, it was well written n flowed well
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I can like, seriously taste the cinnamon kiss right now lol. I agree with Sean. I love that phrase. It surprised me at first that you were writing a poem about kissing a girl, and then I read at the bottom that it was fro ma guy's perpective ;P haha it's great. I love this poem. It's so romantic and the descriptions are awesome. What a twist! very creative lol.

Yeah...What a lovely poem!I loved it! Your descriptions were so beautiful...=)And i know it must have been quite difficult to write from a boys view but you achieved it and got an amazing poem.Absolutely awesome, KEEP WRITING!5/5
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...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...

Really great.. really sensed from a guys p.o.v

great work

5/5

kazza

Great job.....this is a great poem...........5/5

This piece is so calming. As I read it I could just feel the tension in my muscles relaxing....
I love the imagery as well. I could get lost in this poem so easily. Well done!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow, that last line ties in so well with everything. you were very descriptive about everything, goodjob.

Amazing poem! there was so much imagery!!!! It totally captivated me the whole way through---and I love the title---5/5 great write

I really really really liked the end. it was very well set out. well done!

This was very beautiful and sensual! GREAT WORK!!!

Jessy --
Haha, good thing you wrote that this was from a guys perspective, I was getting a bit worried. Lol, anyway..
The rhyming of this poem was terrific! Some of the rhymes you chose weren`t so simple, and not so commonly found. That definitely added a nice twist. The flow kind of fluctuated in the last stanza, but it all worked out. Again, your grammar and spelling was great! You did a really great job on this one! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

With someone that is younger than me, you write real good. 5/5
-Kakashi

This poem was awesome, it really was great! There is no critisism needed here!

-annmarie

Aw, this is so cute and powerful.. And very different since it was written from a guys point of view. Very nice twist, and I loved the ending. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Great poem! I love the flow it has and the rhyming is perfect. You are a really great writer! 5/5
- Polly

Extraordinary work, bravo on such a superlative and simply fantastic write, incredibly well done, great job Jessy!!!