A Feeling That's Come Over Me.

by Natalie   Jun 24, 2006


There's a feeling that's come over me,
It's something I've never felt before.
When I dream it's you I always see,
And when I'm awake I'm wanting more.

You are the flame that lights my candle,
Brightening every beautiful day.
And when I whisper your name 'Mitchell',
You come and take all my pain away.

Without you I don't know what I'd do,
Cause it's only with you I belong.
Words can't explain what I feel for you,
And I know it's real, It can't be wrong.

You'll always hold the key to my heart,
Cause you gave me the strength to believe.
You pulled me through from the very start,
And promised me that you'd never leave.

You are always there to pick me up,
Whenever I feel the need to fall.
Even when I said I had enough,
You still stayed by my side through it all.

There's a feeling that's come over me,
And I can see it in your eyes too.
You love me and you have set me free,
I'm complete when I am around you.

{This is old. I found it and tried to fix it up a bit. but yeah.}

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  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl another amazing poem. i always luv reding love poems. this was great. great use of words and its well structured too. keep up the great work =D xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawna

    Great poem!! It's nice to hear a happy love poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by arunima gautam

    Hey natalie, its arunima. i was glad to see your honest comments over my poem and i appreciate it completely. i loved your poem. its simple yet so elegant. keep the fire up. love to hear from you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Good poem hun!
    I love the 5th stanza, its the best of all!
    keep it up
    NemO xoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really liked this one. so full of heartfelt words. Greatly expressed yourself there hun. Thanx for reading my work. I appreciate it very much.