This is the story of my life. thnx for contributing your share of poems.

This is a kick ass poem, now i feel happy that i read it!!

This is such a good poem, I absoutley loved this part

You are trying to erase
What used to be "we"
And the one who really suffers here
Is the lonely girl...Me

I totally know how that feels!! It's like they don't care that they tore you up inside!! It's heart wrenching!! I'm sorry you have to go through heart break.. nobody deserves it! Good poem though 5/5! And thank you for the comment on my poem, it means a lot. If you ever need to talk, you can e-mail me at anytime
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~