The soul is deep and it is hard for shallow people to see it.

I really like this poem it expresses my feeling about god. my unsurities but my love for him.
and i like your rhyme sceam. abca. but did you notice you changed it in one stanza.

His Kingdom Is Paved In Gold
Or So I Am Told
But How Can I Believe
That It If Forever That You Leave.

here it goes aabb
and the last line in the stanza doesnt really make sense.... but i like it...