My Last Chance

by Emma   Jun 24, 2006


My last chance
with this last dance
to make a wish
for one special kiss
dreams comin true
slowly turning me blue
turning my dreams
into violent screams
memories filled with tears
as the song ending nears
I can feel you leavin'
tryin to believe in
us, but as the song ends
my heart begins to bend
my last dance
my last chance
to tell you
I really do love you....

**Written about something that has happen...more emotion...not sure if i like it....

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~Emma

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good work. I thought you did a good job. Some of the rhymes feel a bit forced.

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    It was absolutely lovely the rhyme was great made for a easy to read well flowing poem, i loved it another great poem xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. that's so sad. Made me cry cause I can relate to it alot (minus the dancing part) but you did a great job on this. It flowed very well and was easy to read and it was filled with so much emotion. My favorite lines were:
    turning my dreams
    into violent screams
    memories filled with tears
    as the song ending nears
    Those really stood out to me, Great job on this! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Well, i can definitely relate to this alot..that is so sweet, i loved it! You kind of confused me, but it's ok towards the end i knew what you were saying!!! Keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    It was short but so emotional and powerful. Sometimes it is short two-lined poems or so that make the biggest powerful difference. There was a nice flow to it, and I totally understood what I was reading. Great work! Keep it up! 5/5

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