I enjoyed it a lot! |
by Natalie
I loved the last stanza. I thought it was great!! This whole poem was great. |
by Emma
Wonderful...I am speachless...That was a really amazing poem...Nice job... |
I love dthe ending! about the lonely little mathc! totally kool. beautiful poem. loved it all. |
by Bridgette
This is really good.. I like the whole idea behind the poem.. poems about fallen angels always seem to appeal to me. The rhyme scheme was great and didn't seem forced in no way and the words all fit together nicely. Great job on this! 5/5* |
by Kaylee
This poem was well written and the meaning behind it was alright. I especially loved the part of lighting the candle with the match. This one line seemed a syllable too long with the word seems: |
Very effective images. especially the idea of a lonely angel with a single match. very very strong. |