Okay, Hey I'm the head of Fish bowl and I was happy to get your application. You have great poteintal, and I'm looking forward to watching you blossem, but I have a few pointers for you if you want them:

a) Slag is not really good form for writing poetry
b) stanzas are your bestfriend lol

Passion is writing with out it they are just meaningless words. I wish you thebest

now for some club info

1) I need you to read the club rule in maditory read for Jenn
2) I need you to be active in discussions if not I will most likly kick you from the club.. sounds harsh but I rather have active members and a small club then a huge one with inactive people.
3) and most of call take suggestions with a smile we're only trying to help you, and if you have a problem just give me or ano=yother member a shout okay?

Best of Luck
Jenn

Ps: Poem wise this is cute =]