That is perfectly amazing. it flows as smooth as water, the words match eachother perfectly. this is simply phenomenal.

Ooo. Dark...lol. Dark poems entrance me for some odd reason. >.> Flow was very good, topic was excellent, and you expressed yourself very well again. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Your poems are amazing...so amazing I'm speechless nothing to say

This was very haunting and very sad. Extremly well written.

You have such a wonderful talent of putting meaning across with such flow and great expression.. this is brilliant, brilliant, brilliant [now i'm lost for words and that doesn't happen often!!] keep writing, your poems are wicked. xx

WOW....you are very talented, I'm jealous! keep on writing, I look forward to reading more dark poems...5/5....*hugz*

I loved this poem its just amazing

Wow so deep, and very well written, great stuff nice detail

Hey great poem. really good flow too. you can feel the emotion behind it. i enjoyed it.
Dee

I liked the consistency of identity and themes within this poem. the imagery was wonderfully penned and your metaphors and poet techniques were outstanding.
it was dark and quite haunting in its own way but it seemed to have this resounding feeling of actually making a lot of sense in it.

Great, 5/5

I loved it wow