I thought this was a pretty good poem. 5/5 worthy still. But especially this part

Scream that you love her
Just so that I can hear
But if you think I care
Your sadly mistaken, dear

thats what made me give you the 5, it hits hard and is a main point in the poem. Great peice of work. Last line confused me a little but thats probably because Im a lil to young to understand.

Strong words... Nice poem... Good work!

Oh isnt it funny how guys really do try to do things like that with their new girlfriends to make us jealous...please...rarely does it work...stick with this feeling you have now that it won't bother you! Amazing write, one we all relate to!
-Krissey

This is a really good poem, it's short and you clearly said what you wanted to. Your message was strong, and well written.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Wow... amazing poem, i can relate to this one! i really liked it alot! good job

Ur an amazing person to keep urself so strong thru it all...well done on everything u hav acheived

xx

Great poem! I can really relate to this. Stay strong because I know how you feel. All your poetry is so amazing and beautifully emotional. Keep it up! 5/5