by Kaylee
Yes, this is a poem I can relate to but I'll take that further and tell you why. |
I loved this poem! I can relate to it so much. I always enjoy poems I can relate to. There was so much emotion expressed in this. The overall flow and rhymong was great. Good job! 5/5 |
Wow 5/5 great poem i liked it showed alot of emotion good job |
by RetroRavey
This poem put out a lot of emotion and it was written very well. I say this a bunch but 5/5. Keep on writing, and I'll try to read your other poems as well! |
by Nelle
I loved it!!! It was great, not a thing i would change! You really expressed your words well!! Keep it up hun 5/5 |
by Colby
Hey whats up, great poem, flows nicely. Very sad though... |
by AnnMarie
Good poem............ The second paragraph or what ever it is called I think that the last line should say '' but you never dried the tears I had cried'', I just think it would ryhme better. |
by Natalie
I tried to smile and be alright |
by Dre4meR
Great Poem...The love this piece because the words you wrote...even though I have not experience with...I could feel the emotions inside...Very Nice...Good Work |
Man seems like poem after poem I read I can really relate..I wish I could write my feelings out like this seriously..because there is someone I feel the same way about..it was like reading my words!! Wonderfully written poems, you express yourself and get your meaning acorss very well! |
by Poetess Lana
Wow... this was great. and i can totally relate to it. |
by Princess09
Great poem,different then nething ive ever read on here!! 2nd to last stanza is my fav!!!! |
An honest 5/5!!!! Mind Blowing poem!!! Absolutly MIND BLOWING!!!u write like an angle:):)....&& that is a really good poem:):) |
by LadyPearl
Great beginning! Nice emotions and great flow |
I understand what your poem's about, I know the feeling, you described it perfectly, specially in the end. |
Great poem, full of really strong images and a lot of feelings. well done!!! |
Great poem, full of really strong images and a lot of feelings. well done!!! |
by Jasmine
Wow! |
by lana
Another great poem written by you |