Comments : The End

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I really liked your poem, it's short and you said everything you wanted to say. This is my favorite part, it's really sad and descriptive:

    Cramped in the corner
    making soft cries
    wishing forever that the voices told lies
    every night a small part of me dies

    Good job!

    XoXo
    Gaby