Very well done...powerful poem with strong meaning...I really feel as though I can relate to it...keep writing!

Great piece, it is very well written with a lot of powerfully portrayed content and well structured ideas.

Very interesting and original write!

These 2 lines were breathtaking:

I wanted to hold you and never let go,
To have your torn heart close to mine.

You have a beautiful wasy of expressing yourself even when the topic is of a sad nature.

Aww.. that's so sad, but such a great poem. I loved the descriptions you had and the way you worded it, very deep. Great job on this! 5/5

WOW!!!!!!! This poem was amazing!!!!! I mean I just love your choice of words, they kept me on the edge of my seat....beautiful dedication to the one you are writing too...in a hard time its nice to have a friend like you!
-Krissey

P.S could you read "two voices unheard"

Beautiful job, Agree with everyone

That was awsome, lots of emotion in this. i can realize what it means and understand the feelings.

great poem!!!
5/5~
David Marshall~~~~

Wow! That was one of the best poems I've ever read. I absolutly loves every word of it. Amazing work 5/5.

--Steph

P.S. you're going on my favorites list ;)

That really was good. That was just a bit of soft and such...weird but there seemed to be a more softer feel...sound?...to it when read. The words were well and gave a far more emotional strand that was appropriate for it. Enjoyed the piece with the words, the flow, etc. But the last stanza felt more stong to me. Still the emotions and everything was quite well.
~Faith

Hey..love your poem..it was very movinggg

I agree with everyone...that was an origional, amazing write. I loved it
Great job keep it up
A truly beautiful poem
5/5 for sure
Breanna

Ay,
dis poem wus rly breath takin fo
me cuz i can relate to sum of da
thingz herre.5/5
keep up da gd work mamii ;)

VERY DEEP I LOVE IT...IT REMIND ME OF MY CURRENT RELATIOSHIP...I WAS TOUCH DEEPLY BY UR POEM...IT IS AMAZING AM AM TELLIN U SHOLD BECOME A MORE THEN JUST A POET...U SHOULD HAVE BOOKS OF UR POEMS BRAVO

Awesome work

I absolutely loved this one :) It was so beautifully written! Good job! The first stanza was amazingly captivating! It makes me think of what people have said to me before! Great Write 5/5

Wow this is really good! I love the title also I think it goes good with your poem!

This was a very nice poem..and as i read it..it reminded me of soo many different things...It shows that you put a lot of emotion into this:)..Good Good:):)

One of the best poems ive ever read
<3

Amazing and beautiful... it almost seems to me like a person suffering from mpd, which i know all about... it's beautiful.
5/5