by XDyingx-In-xVeinX Jun 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
As i run faster and faster, i can feel me heart pounding from my chest. In the mysterious woods i run. I have been running all my life, and from what? I have been running from a \'\'monster\'\'. A monster so dangerous, i can never stop running or i will die a slow and painfull death. I remember one day i couldnt take it anymore. I had to give up on myself and let the monster kill me. I also remember that last thought that ran thru my cold, numb and motionless body. I remember i had never felt that scared in my life. I new what i was doing , even tho i didnt know if it was right or not. I stoped running. I turned around. The \'\'monster\'\' i have been running from all this time, |
Good job. This one connected with me. It's got good meaning behind it. |
by kida
This sends chills down my spine u r a fantastic writer. plz comment sum of mine if u hav da time |
Thanx |
by Wake
It was all good..i think the story felt real as u r in it, and of course the twist was Phenominal,i think...it was beautiful...i liked it alot. |
by Bridgette
Wow I loved this! Especially the twist at the ending. Very well though out and I could definitely relate to it. Great job on this! 5/5 |