The past kills

by XDyingx-In-xVeinX   Jun 25, 2006


As i run faster and faster, i can feel me heart pounding from my chest. In the mysterious woods i run. I have been running all my life, and from what? I have been running from a \'\'monster\'\'. A monster so dangerous, i can never stop running or i will die a slow and painfull death. I remember one day i couldnt take it anymore. I had to give up on myself and let the monster kill me. I also remember that last thought that ran thru my cold, numb and motionless body. I remember i had never felt that scared in my life. I new what i was doing , even tho i didnt know if it was right or not. I stoped running. I turned around. The \'\'monster\'\' i have been running from all this time,
the time i have been so scared to face the facts.
And infact, the \'\'monster\'\' i have been running from was.... my past.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony Newsome

    Good job. This one connected with me. It's got good meaning behind it.

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    This sends chills down my spine u r a fantastic writer. plz comment sum of mine if u hav da time

  • 18 years ago

    by XDyingx-In-xVeinX

    Thanx

  • 18 years ago

    by Wake

    It was all good..i think the story felt real as u r in it, and of course the twist was Phenominal,i think...it was beautiful...i liked it alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow I loved this! Especially the twist at the ending. Very well though out and I could definitely relate to it. Great job on this! 5/5