I messed up on this one, o well

No, i dont think you messed up...i really like it!!

Wow I loved this! Especially the twist at the ending. Very well though out and I could definitely relate to it. Great job on this! 5/5

It was all good..i think the story felt real as u r in it, and of course the twist was Phenominal,i think...it was beautiful...i liked it alot.

Thanx

This sends chills down my spine u r a fantastic writer. plz comment sum of mine if u hav da time

Good job. This one connected with me. It's got good meaning behind it.