Everything's so wrong

by Wings Of Flames   Jun 25, 2006


I caught your tears with light,
Forgiveness was always there,
My lips trembling words,
Of how much I truely care,

You spat and bled to me,
I felt your coldest hour,
It ran through my veins,
Like a hot needle shower,

The burning of the sundown,
As it causes me to weep,
Stars whispering secrets,
As my tears forever creep,

Where has time crossed me?
To take me down this road,
The sky has fallen victim,
To the heavy rain's load,

Putrid flaming birds,
Fly across the crimson sky,
As it begins to fall,
Everything begins to die,

Their insides on the out,
Maggots seep from the ground,
The world belting down on me,
So I choose to make no sound.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Grossely pretty. mm-hmm. i liked it.
    love Suz

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Your poems are so wonderful and your writing isbrillaint. your words are always creative with such depth and wisdom. your descriptions of things are amazing. this poem i felt had a element of loneliness. it was more sad than dark, but maybe that was just me. great work from a great poet.

    Brad

    P.S. Thanks for all your wonderful comments. you're so great! but i do think you give me way too much credit. but thank you.

    P.P.S. you're more of a writer than i'll ever be. i just wish i had your talent...and i mean that.

    P.P.P.S. im not a big fan of love poems either, lol.