Your poems are so wonderful and your writing isbrillaint. your words are always creative with such depth and wisdom. your descriptions of things are amazing. this poem i felt had a element of loneliness. it was more sad than dark, but maybe that was just me. great work from a great poet.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for all your wonderful comments. you're so great! but i do think you give me way too much credit. but thank you.

P.P.S. you're more of a writer than i'll ever be. i just wish i had your talent...and i mean that.

P.P.P.S. im not a big fan of love poems either, lol.

Grossely pretty. mm-hmm. i liked it.
love Suz