by mossgirl19 Jun 25, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Loving is a lovely thing |
This has such beautiful sentiments and really says so much more upon each reading.I like your unusual wordings(though 'flap' in the 5th line strikes me personally as a bit awkward), though I love your images/metaphors-especially lines 3 & 4.This whole piece sums up the truth and beauty of love.Very nicely written, and a beautiful message indeed. |
by Elisa
Wow. that is all i could possibly say |