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  • 18 years ago

    by Elisa

    Wow. that is all i could possibly say

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This has such beautiful sentiments and really says so much more upon each reading.I like your unusual wordings(though 'flap' in the 5th line strikes me personally as a bit awkward), though I love your images/metaphors-especially lines 3 & 4.This whole piece sums up the truth and beauty of love.Very nicely written, and a beautiful message indeed.