Wow! Great stuff! I was blown away. This poem's emotions were so realistic (trust me, I know) and the ending was touching, yet simple. I love it! Six out of Five!

Keep it up!

-[liesoftheheart]

Good work! but you realy have a thing for sad poems, dont you? why, you have an energy flowing from you, write someting bright once, you'll be VERY good at it!