Hey man! :) that was beautiful :) just want 2 encourage u to split up those stanzas... it can get a little daunting 4 the reader having 2 read that massive blob!! ha ha ha I've been there... u trick them into reading further if you show ur stanza's cause they think it's not as long as wat it is! :) just a tip *hugs* I loved it 5/5 from me *smiles

Ruthie xoxo

Such a beautiful poem and a lovely dedication. Great write, keep it up. And thanks for commenting on mine.