by Resplendant Rose Jun 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Standing in the shadows |
by Krissey
I really liked this poem especially because I could relate to it..along time ago i wrote a poem sorta like this..I hate when guys never see personality and I too wonder well if I wasn't pretty would you still like me? Wonderully written I liked how you released your feelings!! |
by Dre4meR
Brilliant...I think the tittle should be "Walked Away"...Keep up the good work |
Very awesome! kinda left me wanting to know more tho... but thats good, makes you think. well done. as for a title, im not sure id know what to call it either... |
I really liked this poem! I can sorta relate. Well actually I can relate a lot. Anyways, the flow and rhyming were good. It held a lot of emotion. For titles, hmm I can't really think of any sorry. Good poem though. Great job! |
by RetroRavey
I would name this poem "Deaf and Silent" but hat's just me. I really enjoyed reading this poem... I like it bunches and bunches, ansd I give it a 5/ excellent work. |