by SilenceBreaksTheHeart Jun 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Dreams |
by Midnight Sun
I really loved how you described tears filling the cracks in your heart...that was a really unique way to word that...great job! 5/5! |
by X~Angie~X
Omg wow this is amazing.. i lvoe ur work.. ur so talented. this is a great poem. u should b proud! i relaly like it.. i like the flow and word choice.. its great.. keep writing... great job 5/5 |
Wow this is beautiful, I really love the rhyme scheme you used, you should be really proud |