Wow this is beautiful, I really love the rhyme scheme you used, you should be really proud
5/5
love
Xx-me-xX

Omg wow this is amazing.. i lvoe ur work.. ur so talented. this is a great poem. u should b proud! i relaly like it.. i like the flow and word choice.. its great.. keep writing... great job 5/5
take care
luve angie

I really loved how you described tears filling the cracks in your heart...that was a really unique way to word that...great job! 5/5!
~Jules