Awww thank you love. but i am going to thank you because no one ever wrote me a poem before.

Awwwwwness this is so sweet!

Wow.
WOW.
wowowowowowowowow.

Excellt, in the first stanza the first 3 lines make sense hten the last two lines talk abotu sumthing else so it shoudl be its on line break. be careful of ur line breaks and use pounctutation...great job.

when u use
words
like
this
it
adds
emotionn.
excelent.
keep it
up.

wonderful
style.
lissa

I love this! its so true and deep. i love it! you have a great writing style too. keep it up! xXx