Without You Near

by Italian Stallion   Jun 25, 2006


Without you here
I cry myself to sleep
And wish you where near
To take good care of me

I pray night and day
For you to come back soon
I sit out by the bay
And watch the sunset

I wish upon a star
As I start to close my eyes
I feel a soft gentle touch
And I know it's you

My love
My everything
Just like two white doves
Oh how I love you

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 18 years ago

    by SOinLOVEwithYOU

    Omg!!! you are like my new idol! i wikked love your poetry! your awesome hunnney!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    This poem is very simple and lovely
    I love the last 2 stanzas and the first too.lol the whole poem is very great and well expressed!

    keep it up
    Luv
    NemO xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I feel a soft gentle touch
    It is you.
    [The syllable count changed dramaticly there, maybe you could have..

    I feel a soft gentle touch,
    And I know it's you.

    I dunno, lol]

    I sit out by the bay
    And watch the sunset
    [I thought those two lines were really pretty.]
    Pretty good poem overall. 5/5 =)

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