I feel a soft gentle touch
It is you.
[The syllable count changed dramaticly there, maybe you could have..

I feel a soft gentle touch,
And I know it's you.

I dunno, lol]

I sit out by the bay
And watch the sunset
[I thought those two lines were really pretty.]
Pretty good poem overall. 5/5 =)

This poem is very simple and lovely
I love the last 2 stanzas and the first too.lol the whole poem is very great and well expressed!

keep it up
Luv
NemO xxxxxx

Omg!!! you are like my new idol! i wikked love your poetry! your awesome hunnney!