by LifeLess Jun 26, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Your the reason i don't do them now your the reason i don't know how |
I think you should add another stanza at the end that wraps up everything. it was an amazing poem but i felt like the ending was a lil open. |
by Christie
This is quite a good poem, has a lot of emotion in it. =) well written, flow is wonderful. 4/5, ur last stanza seems a little forced. =) |