Awww! thats so sad and really well written! wel done

Aw.. I'm really sorry that you lost someone that apparently was a great person. It's hard, but it gets better in time :) Alot of your emotions could be seen coming out through this poem, it was very sad with much love showing through. The flow and rhythm held up well, letting you keep your attention on the poem & feelings. I give it a 5/5** Great job on this!

That was beautiful...Great job...i loved every line in it....
Emma 5/5

I'm extremely sorry for you loss..hurts me to know a poem I read about a death is true, although it always seems like poems about a loved one passing turns out the best because people truly take whats in there heart and throw it out there! Beautifully written poem I loved it! May God Bless you and the ones who mourn!
-Krissey