Comments : Broken silhouette

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    I really liked your poem. It was very emotional, I've lost 2 relatives to cancer, so I know it really hurts. I hope you start feeling better soon. Wonderful poem.

    Thanks for the comment :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow. This was sad hun. Although it was a tad short, I liked it and I could relate to it!

    You taught me how to laugh.
    You taught me how to live.
    You taught me to stand up
    and sometimes to forgive.
    [I loved that stanza. Repeating 'you taght me how to...' I thought that was great!]
    And, Thanks for your comment tehe =P 5/5 Keep up the great work!

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It wasn't really great for some of the words but the emotion that it portrayed was good. Short for length yet strangely nicely done.
    ~Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    YES YES YES!!!
    oh the excellence in you!
    final;ly ive found a poet i enjoy.
    im going to read another few more and consider adding you to my favs.
    THANK YOU!
    ~EMma

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Rather short but still very effective. Displays your emotion well.
    Good work.
    xxx Ami

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow, beautiful poem, excellent words! It flows so nicely and is wonderful, I can relate so much ofcourse, you know since you read my poem. Keep it up and thank you for that nice comment you have left! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    Amber ,Its sounds like you`ve had a lot of pain in your life,otherwise how could you express it so well.your poetry is good beyond your years.

  • 18 years ago

    by Willow

    Oh thats sad. really sad. i hope ur feeling better. stay strong. keep on writting too.
    love willow xxoo