by Raychil
I really liked your poem. It was very emotional, I've lost 2 relatives to cancer, so I know it really hurts. I hope you start feeling better soon. Wonderful poem. |
by Natalie
Wow. This was sad hun. Although it was a tad short, I liked it and I could relate to it! |
It wasn't really great for some of the words but the emotion that it portrayed was good. Short for length yet strangely nicely done. |
YES YES YES!!! |
by Amy
Rather short but still very effective. Displays your emotion well. |
by Sarah Ann
Wow, beautiful poem, excellent words! It flows so nicely and is wonderful, I can relate so much ofcourse, you know since you read my poem. Keep it up and thank you for that nice comment you have left! xxx |
by Deana
Amber ,Its sounds like you`ve had a lot of pain in your life,otherwise how could you express it so well.your poetry is good beyond your years. |
by Willow
Oh thats sad. really sad. i hope ur feeling better. stay strong. keep on writting too. |