by Jenni Jun 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You swear she's the most beautiful girl ever. on the dance floor, arms wrapped around your waist & she can't stop looking you in the eyes. you swear she's the best you've had. |
by Kitten
Very thoughtful its almost more a short story than a poem though |
by becca
This is so touching and thought provoking. i like the way you have layed it out, as it makes it more unique and interesting. a great write! keep it up!xXx |
by Delie
This type of "story" is reallly great! it's so true how some people are with the wrong person. the person that won't treat them the way everyone should be treated. the one taht might not love you. |
by Stephanie
Wow. That was sad, yet beautiful. |
by David
Gee this is good. i read it and was like whoa. had to read it a few times. the storyline in it was beautifully panned out. the ending was not as dramatic. but anyways i loved another of your poems! |