A Pen And A Piece Of My Mind

by Ironic Allure   Jun 26, 2006


In hindsight, this wasn't the safest place to start,
You've got something to say,
Oh but it's nothing of importance,
It can wait.
This wasn't meant as give up or goodbye,
This was a pen and a piece of my mind,
But this force is driving me to test the speed of light,
It's sad to admit,
While the skyline stays this way, I won't fall alseep tonight.
Every time I turn around you're always looking away;
It's just the nature of the game that we're playing,
Your social deviance is teasing me- I know what I want,
But I can't compete, I can't impress,
We've seen this fall before;
The imminent's stopped calling,
And now, without a warning all my words have lost their weight.
A cessation of all gravity, a loss of all sincerity,
As we burn with indelible flames.

Didn't feel it needed anymore.
Also feel it's lacking something, but there we go.x

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very nice job again 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    I loved this poem, but this particular part mayd me relate in some way acuz i and i fink darew me in an dkeep reitign because stay stafe and stonr gna nehearlfy too.
    *BANGBANG*

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    "While the skyline stays this way, I won't fall alseep tonight.
    Every time I turn around you're always looking away;
    It's just the nature of the game that we're playing,"

    i loved the poem, but this particular part made me relate in some way, and i think that's what drew me in.
    keep writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    *AntiSocial16*

  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    Today i saw someone put 'Georgous'. i don't know why i'm telling you this. but the moral of the story is; you're a lovely piece of human and for that reason and that reason only i want your arse on MSN. sort it out? cause that'd be lovely.x

    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    Fgshredghertgjet
    i 'lobe' it. like i 'lobe' you. ;D

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