Ana

Sabrina --
Ahh, I see that`s your name. What a lovely name ;; that`s what my parents were going to name me! But I got stuck with Samantha Hollywood, not so bad, I guess. But, back to the poem --
This was definitely an improvement frm your last poem I read. I really liked this one a lot ;; you did a great job! The flow and the rhyming didn`t seem too forced, which is good. Keep this up, wonderful job. 5/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

This is really sad, yet really well written. You did a good job expressing emotion and pain and the flow is flawless. Amazing write! Definately a 5/5. Stay Strong---

No hun, don't let Ana beat you. Luv ya & don't want you to get ill. I care so much :)

Great poem. I dislike how people starve themselfs to look like sticks. Keep it up

Beautiful and wonderful poem. Excellent job in describing yourself and situation, it was very unique and a great pleasure to read. However, my side advice is kicking in and I really wish hun that you would hear me out on one thing. I had a friend who died from anorexia. A dear, dear friend. She was the light in everyone's hearts...lied about eating, starved herself every day, until her body failed her. She had collapsed outside, walking alone, and slipped into a coma that never went into remission. She was found on a deserted street possibly two hours later, her body cold without life. When I think of her I wish I could change anyone's hearts which move towards anorexia or bulemia. It kills my soul really, I wish I could be of a help but no one ever takes my advice anyway, as you can see. Take care, and be well.