My Secret

by Albert   Jun 26, 2006


It all started it out as a dream
but then you walked in so serene
the brown hair at your shoulders glistened in the sun like a rose petal blooming in the spring your eyes mesmerized my soul as they stared deeply into mine your hands as smooth as the silk of the finest thread. As the days went on i loved you more and more it was like an addiction craving for your love you don't know this but your my heart and i feel you with every beat of it's pump if only if only i could tell you my secret love how much i love you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    There! now at least it's a 3.0! good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    I'M gonna rate you a PERFECT SCORE for that one, to bring up that 1.0, because it's really important to get emotions into poems. if you take time to write your feelings down, no matter what the case, its a good job well done. that score will be going up here pretty quick!