Interesting angle on the poem. I think punctuation could make it better but its quite intreguing. Keep it up!

I like it dont stop. great job

I like it alot. i like how the title is not mentioned in the poem..dunno why, but i just liked that.

great poem xxxxx

That is really good.. i like the word usage that you had. very powerful. Great job on this! 5/5

Hey thanx for what you said about 'without you' i went ahead and finished it

I like this poem i recon you should go further with it and make it longer! =]
greatwrite keep it up =]
5/5
lovelove
Alice
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