I like this poem. I like how you're saying that you are moving on and looking ahead, but this person's always going to have a place in your heart. Nice job! Keep it up!
Thank you SO much for commenting!
Haley

I love this poem. It is wonderful because it expresses how everyone feels after something terrible happens in a break up or something. Wonderful.

Awesome poem!! you are a really good writer. there is alot of emotion in this poem also..great job, keep it up

Your poems aree madd awesomee n i like them alott :]

I like this one, it has a lovely sense of closure and an undertone of pain so, yje title slowly moving on is perfect as this is what the poem embodies. Gr8 poem,
Beth xxx