by natalie Jun 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
God needed a new angel, |
by Sondos
This is very touching I am very sorry to hear about your loss. The first stanza was the best and it really was brilliant however your last stanza really needs a bit of work, your ending it with tear to rhyme with tear is a little forced but i can see that its difficult to find anything to else to rhyme. You have great potential! Well Done! |
by Bonnie Rose
I just wanted to say this is a beauitful poem and very touching. i really like it a lot. keep writing because your very talented. |