Dare to dream

by The Angel of Secrets   Jun 26, 2006


Don't let anyone take away your mind.
Dare to take a challenge, if you want to unwind.
If you have something on you're mind, let them know,
Give them everything, this is you're personal show.
Let them know that you are the person you are,
Show them you are the driver of you're life's car.
Show them you're faults, show them you're real,
Make sure they know you, let them know how you feel.
Dare to be strong, dare to be free.
Show yourself and say: This is me!
If you might be angry, dare to scream.
If you want to live, dare to dream!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 work. i liked this. ur rhymes were nice:D 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    Wow! This was definatley a different life poem I have read but i definatly enjoyed this write a lot! I like how you kept putting "dare" in front of everything....kept the structure of your poem through the whole thing! wonderfully written...I liked!
    -Krissey

  • 18 years ago

    by Mike Lee

    Great poem, advice that should be taken from everyone...well done:)
    --mike

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Short but this takes none of its power. The content is well expressed throughout with a strong message which is conveyed well to the reader

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Fantastic poem dear, really good, loved the strong message and the way it has been expressed.

    all the best and take care
    5/5

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