Fantastic poem dear, really good, loved the strong message and the way it has been expressed.

all the best and take care
5/5

Short but this takes none of its power. The content is well expressed throughout with a strong message which is conveyed well to the reader

5/5

Great poem, advice that should be taken from everyone...well done:)
--mike

Wow! This was definatley a different life poem I have read but i definatly enjoyed this write a lot! I like how you kept putting "dare" in front of everything....kept the structure of your poem through the whole thing! wonderfully written...I liked!
-Krissey

Gr8 work. i liked this. ur rhymes were nice:D 5/5