Awwww that made me cry..cant explain why, but it did! It was great, I could really really feel your emotion through your words!!! Keep up the great work! 5/5

How touching
This poem opens my eyes to the innocence of children, to the pain a single person can bring, to ones life.
you have expressed your raw emotions extreamly well though out the whole poem
i applaud you for such an achievment.

well done!!!

**smile**

p.s before i forget, thank you for the comment you left on my poem!