Very sad poem.

I thought it was great though! You're an excellent writer! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Whoa amazing poem. great writing. you are really talented. i mean it. great use of imagery. hey thankx for commenting on my poem. it meant alot to me. anyway keep writing.

lots of love
hayley

Well thanks for the compliment im new to the whole poem thing i like your poems but i like this one the best and thanks again for the compliment i did put some thought into it i had my heartbroken a few times by the same guy!!! Guys!! lol ne ways thanks again