Night of Sin

by *colorsofmylife*   Jun 27, 2006


You knew it wasn't right from the start
as you climbed on top; took the reins away
the look in your eyes I can not earase
that empty loving glare

You reached for my lips; cold and stiff from fear
wispered not to say a word; no one would believe it
your hand slid down to my chest
soon my top hit the floor boards

You took your time with every move you made
as if the power and control was satisfying alone
yet you kept going; nothing would stop you now
as I felt the cool air against my legs
I could see the disgusting twinkle
everytime you attempted to wink

You were motivated with every moan
though I could tell you hated yourself too
you saw the pain filling my entire body
but no hesitation was ever shown

After what seemed like eternity in my mind
you climbed down; leaving me completely empty
I have never been so glad to see your back
as those moments when you walked out of that door

there's no escaping the feelings
you instilled in me that night
my heart is now filled with hatred
as I can no longer look in a man's face

I know your not happy with yourself
you refuse to look at me; touch me
I can not say I am disappointed
because I do not wish to see you again
hopefully you have learned a lesson
that you will never again put another girl through a night of sin

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Execellent work. It has great description and has a very strong effect on the reader.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    You already know what i think of this piece.
    it was astounding to read.
    probably brought some memories which must have touched me
    5/5
    ~Emah

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is good poem, it kept my attention, and the descriptions were well written. I liked the way you told what happened, you described the actions, emotions, and thoughts.

    Good job! 5/5

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Slightly disturbing, deep, emotional poem. It really hit me. Excellent piece, however, definitely a 5/5.

    As always~ Kate

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