by *colorsofmylife* Jun 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You knew it wasn't right from the start |
by Little Dot
Execellent work. It has great description and has a very strong effect on the reader. |
You already know what i think of this piece. |
Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work! |
This is good poem, it kept my attention, and the descriptions were well written. I liked the way you told what happened, you described the actions, emotions, and thoughts. |
Slightly disturbing, deep, emotional poem. It really hit me. Excellent piece, however, definitely a 5/5. |