Very powerful and great flow!
Always very original.

When I read this poem, it has a way of traping you inside of it almost like experiencing and feeling exactly what is written. The trail that you describe I can relate to as the journey of life and the road that has already been traveled. It is bare and desolate when tamed and has nothing much to offer. Great poem.

Liked this alot found it to be an interesting read and the title was eye capturing. The word choice was amazing and the flow was just brilliant. Well done on a nicely written poem~mel

Excellent poem great flow and brings back memories of old and forgotten roads I once traveled,. great write joy to read , your friend Tracy dean 5/5