She Took It All

by Live Love Laugh   Jun 27, 2006


The night settled into its silence
Became so steady and tranquil
You called because she's gone now
Just for the night ...but still.

She took everything, everything,
I ever wanted, I ever needed
Took it with no care at all
Oh, she just took it all

You don't take any notice to this
Very happening affair that exists
Although you say you're miserable
She seems to be caught up in some bliss

Morning doesn't wake you
But she soon arrives right by you,
Tears fulfill her weary eyes
She sits right next to your bedside

She wonders what you think, hoping
That you will just take her back
She's got you stuck in between
Never cutting you any slack

She's taking everything, everything
I ever wanted, I ever needed
She's taking it with no care at all
Oh, she's just taking it all

You claim that you love me
But then again you're lonely
She's the only one that''s there
That you think only seems to care

I let you go, you never came back
I don't you think you ever will
These quiet nights and lonely days
Can only last up until

She took everything, everything
I ever wanted, I ever needed
She took it with no care at all
Oh, she just took it all

She has you now, I let her win
This meaningless war for you
It never seemed to affect you
So here your new journey begins

Cause I'm done.

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  • Great poem. Alot of emotuon was put into it.
    And thanks for the comment.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    A good poem....very touching...I love it....want to read more...

  • 18 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This poem was absolutely awesome, really. you had good tone, and I like how you came back to that same verse everyonce in a while. it flowed really well, and you could relate to it. I'm sorry if this did happen to you to, i have friends who have gone through things similar. Good luck and keep writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Willow

    That was sad. if it happened to u i feel for u. i hope it doesn't happen again.
    love willow xxoo