Mirror

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Jun 27, 2006


In the mirror I see
I see a different part of me
I see a disastrous mind
Bent and cracked
A broken heart at the floor
Shattered in pieces
I see my eyes
That wont unwind
My hands
Rusty and dirty
My memory
All ripped up and old
My feel
Unable to move
Im too tired to get back up
Then pushed back down
I cant think clean of you
Just your souped up lies
I wont touch you
Or your fatal hand
I wont look at you
So Ill know what will happen next
I was stil mending when you came
Then broke it in two, thats where it'll lay
My mind filled with all those lies
ANd too many thoughts of being perfect
So you see why
I hate you so
Never want to look at you
I wont let you see
What you've done to me
So Ill just smile
And tell myself
How far Ive came along
Since three years ago
And Ill tell myself that
In my perfect mirror

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  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    Wow, can you say powerful?
    'Just your souped up lies"
    the word souped was so different, it caught my attention.
    "I see my eyes
    That wont unwind
    My hands
    Rusty and dirty
    My memory
    All ripped up and old
    My feel
    Unable to move"
    these are my favorite lines. they were so sad and exploding with emotion.
    great job,
    5;5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashla

    Hey there summer this iz ur sister this is a nyce poem styll confuzzin but ir eally lyke it your expressing rself in a wierd but awsome and scary ya kno what i mean well luv ya much k33p it up ~~ashla boo~~

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I loved the whole poem, it's beautifully written, and I liked the message. Poems about mirrors are my favorites, and this is definately a good one.

    Good job!

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    That IS really sad. well, I also wrote a sad one on a mirror, and I think yours is better. great job! 5/5

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